One dark night a dice was bouncing on the pitch black ocean then it came to sand and soggy wet grass .As the dice was coming to crash into the sand as it bouncing in front of the moon like a bright light .
wow,what a descriptive piece of writing, Maybe next time you should use more punctuation, I like how your story puts an image in the readers mind. By Neveah and Latoya
wow,what a descriptive piece of writing,
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you should use more punctuation,
I like how your story puts an image in the readers mind.
By Neveah and Latoya